Working Introduction

Of all the things to be redefined, it’s interesting that cleanliness, safety, social status, and self-indulgence should be addressed with a single piece of technology. The detachable shower head has managed to change how we think about all of these aspects of life and there are little to no downsides to having one. I believe this technology has benefited people in ways that we hadn’t thought of and it has surpassed our expectations of its initial, solitary purpose.

Revised:

You wouldn’t think of a detachable shower head as a revolutionary piece of technology that has completely transformed the lives of people. Think about what you have at home; I’m sure you have at least a type of a shower head. Now, for those who have ever had a removable shower head or used one before, how did this change showering habits and what did this make you think of people who owned the technology? Of all the things to be redefined, it’s interesting that cleanliness, safety, social status, and self-indulgence should be addressed with a single piece of technology. The detachable shower head has managed to change how we think about all of these aspects of life and there are little to no downsides to having one. I believe this technology has benefited people in ways that we hadn’t thought of and it has surpassed our expectations of its initial, solitary purpose.

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