Revisions

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Someone wakes up with a tattoo they do not remember getting and can’t tell if it is a butterfly or a bat.  

Someone wakes up with a tattoo they do not remember getting and can’t tell if a butterfly or a bat on their back.

After the waste is sterilized it is placed in sanitary landfills, just like the incinerated waste.

After the sterilization of the waste, it moves to a sanitary landfills, similar to the incinerated waste.

But it is important to consider the waste and the chances that something could happen or that we eventually run out of safe spaces to put this hazardous waste.   

The importance of recognizing the waste produced and the chance that something could happen or that we eventually run out of safe spaces to put hazardous waste, a growing concern

“it”

Whether this is good or bad requires us to look into many aspects of the tattoo gun and how it has affected our culture.  

 Whether good or bad requires us to look into many aspects of the tattoo gun and how it has affected our culture.   

“is”

The importance of this is the tradition behind these kinds of tattoos.

The importance of tradition lies behind these kinds of tattoos.

This is a undoubtedly different culture than before the electric tattoo gun.  

This undoubtedly a different culture, than before the electric tattoo gun.

Nowadays seeing a tattoo on someone is fairly normal.  

Nowadays seeing a tattoo on someone looks fairly normal.

This is a fair amount of the adult population

The poll counts for a large portion of the adult population.  

Some may think this is fine and 18 year olds can do what they want with their bodies but it does worry a large amount of the adult public who is parents to these children and grew up in the time period when tattoos were not as widely accepted.

Some may think an 18 year old getting a tattoo sounds fine and they can do what they want with their bodies but the permanence of tattoos does worry a large amount of the adult public who are parents to these children and grew up in the time period when tattoos were not as widely accepted.

“says”

In an article written in 2012 the authors says that these three reasons, categorize why people get tattoos, applying to the last hundred years,

 In an article written in 2012 the authors gives three reasons, categorize why people get tattoos, applying to the last hundred years,

“tion”

O’Reilly modified the invention and added a ink reservoir and multiple needles to make it adaptable for doing tattoos, (Jinxi).

O’Reilly modified the tattoo gun and added a ink reservoir and multiple needles to make it adaptable for doing tattoos, (Jinxi).

The invention completely changed the art of tattoos.

The new technology completely changed the art of tattoos.

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