Sentence Revisions 12/5

Tabitha Farthing

With the advent of recorded sound and the technologies through which it is projected, it remained accessible to all available ears.

Correction: With the advent of recorded sound and the corresponding projection technologies, sound remained accessible to all available ears.

Kenney argues that this perspective ignores the many ways in which recorded music brought people together by asserting, “To emphasize solitary receptivity denies the phonograph’s power to stimulate…new musical cultures” (3).

Correction: Kenney contradicts Eisenberg’s perspective by drawing attention to the many ways in which recorded music brought people together by asserting, “To emphasize solitary receptivity denies the phonograph’s power to stimulate…new musical cultures” (3).

Headphones allow sound to take shape within the mind and transform an individual’s mentality, a function which highlights the privatization of sound as a result of the technology.

Correction: Headphones allow sound to take shape within the mind and transform an individual’s mental state, privatizing sound as a result.

Headphones

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In the article “Why The U.S. Chills Its Eggs And Most of the World Doesn’t,” author Rae Ellen Bichell writes in a very casual conversational tone.  He establishes the tone by describing a scene where eggs are not refrigerated, including the pronoun “you” which directs the piece at the reader.  The author follows up with rhetorical questions which the reader can relate to.  The pronoun “we” further emphasizes the casual tone, such as when he writes, “But we’re oddballs.”  While the tone is laid back, Bichell appeals to ethos by quoting credible sources on the topic of eggs.  He structures his argument in a way that is effective and easy to follow by making a statement then backing it up with relevant evidence.  This style causes his argument and voice to prevail, while still including thoughts from experts.

In the article about wooden spoons, the tone is practical yet artistic, abounding with rhetorical devices.  The author uses personification to describe the spoon, calling it “trusty and lovable” and “a quiet ensemble player.”  The author often uses anaphora or parallel sentence structures to stress specific aspects of the technology, such as at the end of the first paragraph.  The pronoun “we” is also used often so as to establish a community mindset about the wooden spoon and show how it interacts with society as a whole.  Sensory imagery is used to set the scene and create a strong argument for the value of the technology, such as when the author juxtaposes it with a stainless steel spoon, writing, “It clanks disagreeably, in contrast to the gentle tapping of wood.”  All these elements aid in creating a practical and focused tone that develops a pointed argument while still crafting the words in a way that is appealing to the reader.

Recorded sound and the technologies through which it is projected have revolutionized society.  From the phonograph to bluetooth speakers, the ability to playback sound has generated a myriad of cultural effects.  One such technology that has altered the fabric of society is headphones.  The introduction of headphones initiated a dramatic shift in social interactions, personalizing the audio landscape and generating a unique cultural response.

For the majority of human history, sound, a sensory dimension of the universe, has been ingested in an open audio environment.  With the advent of recorded sound and the technologies through which it is projected, it remained accessible to all available ears.  Then along came headphones, allowing sound waves to penetrate a single brain, effectively altering the very fabric of society.  The introduction of headphones initiated a dramatic shift in social interactions, personalizing the audio landscape and generating a unique cultural response.

Headphones Value

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My value will be the social aspect of the technology.

Thesis: The introduction of headphones initiated a dramatic shift in social interactions, personalizing the audio landscape and generating a unique cultural response.

Headphones: Workshop Responses

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They can fit in the nook of the human ear, projecting sound waves into the brain.  They can also enclose the outer ear in a seal or lay flat against it.  They are commonly made of plastic, magnets, nickel, and metal.  They can cut off outside noise from the listener, or literally make them deaf over time.  Young people often sport them as fashion statements, flashing the trendy brandname of their choice.  They can be used as a defense mechanism in the office or subway, warding off unwanted attention.  They have many practical applications, such as in the military.

Neighbors pass each other on the street, absorbed by the sound waves floating through their brain cavity.  They do not acknowledge each other or even see each other.  People fear the sound in the open air, they long for the personal audio escape.  Personal interaction is dead, people can only communicate through the wires that reach their ears.

People standing on subways, glancing around nervously, with no auditory escape to occupy their minds.  Gym-goers fighting over the music playlist played in the open air.  On airplanes, there might be increased interaction, however, conversations are full of bickering over the lost technology as babies screech in the background.  Runners on the street blast music from their phone.  Military personnel and government officials operating switchboards are consumed in a noisy chaos as they lack the device to focus in on an individual sound.

Without headphones, people would listen to music in the open environment, creating a social audio experience.  People would regularly gather around radios and stereos to enjoy the sound.  Music would be projected on the subways, streets, and gym.  Rooms and offices might be sound proof in order for the listener to play the music or radio station of their choice without interfering with others in the vicinity.

Newspaper Article Headphones

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Special to The New York Times. “Jersey township passes curb on headphones.” New York Times, 12 July 1982. Retrieved from http://search.proquest.com/docview/121986996? accountid=14902. Accessed 9 Nov 2016.

This article, published during the period of the Walkman frenzy, reports on a proposed ban on wearing headphones while walking across the street, driving, or biking in the Woodbridge Township of New Jersey.  The penalty for this offense is proposed to be up to fifty dollars in fines, fifteen days in prison, or both.  I thought this was interesting because any given offender would obviously pay the small fine rather than spend two weeks in jail.  It states the reasoning for this measure is that there could be potentially be room for danger with everyone wearing headphones, due to their supposed inattention to their surroundings.  The article claims that there has not been much public resistance to the proposition, which I believe is extreme and prohibits necessary freedoms.  It also casts the non-noise canceling ability of Sony’s headphones in a positive light.  The company even provides a warning on the product that turning up the volume too high could result in blocking out ambient noise.  I think this is an interesting detail because society today highly values the noise canceling function of headphones, which contrasts with this early perspective on the technology.  Often today, if they are lacking in this area, they are viewed as useless.

This source is unrelated to most of my sources, however, it does connect in the sense of the noise-canceling function.  It offers a negative perspective of the feature, that of the safety implications.  If I investigate this further, I would look into the proposed distraction headphones may cause in activities such as driving and whether there are any real legal bans on the use of headphones in certain environments.

Snopes Headphones

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LaCapria, Kim. “Buds Zapper.” Snopes, 7 July 2015, http://www.snopes.com/girl-killed-earbuds/ #!. Accessed 9 Nov. 2016.

This source addresses the claim that a girl died of electrocution by wearing earbuds plugged into an iPhone while it was charging. It shows an image of the supposedly electrocuted girl. The author disputes the credibility of the news story by showing that the same headline circulated on several other news sites at the same time, in different countries, with varying details. I found the news story very humorous, for it is clearly fake, using unprofessional language and lacking in emotion. This story reveals society’s innate fear of technology and electricity as something foreign to its basic understanding of how things work.

This source offers a new dimension to the understanding of my topic: the emotional response to the technology. It reveals the fear associated with headphones with something as outlandish as electrocution resulting from their use. This allows me to investigate other possible fears that stem from headphone use, some which may be valid, such as hearing loss and inattentive walking or driving.

CDSC #2 Headphones

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Russotti, J. S., and United States. Naval Medical Research Development Command. Sonar Headphone Selection for Optimum Performance : An Overview. Groton, CT: Naval Submarine Medical Research Laboratory, 1995. Print. Report (Naval Submarine Medical Research Laboratory) ; No. 1197.

This report by the Naval Submarine Medical Research Laboratory outlines the importance of the acoustic performance of headphones in the signal clarity of sonar systems.  The purpose is to demonstrate the need for upgrading this technology used in the military.  The document proposes, “Reduction of noise levels in sonar spaces to permit use of better headphone designs is a highly desirable solution.  Recent developments in active noise canceling headsets show promise as an interim solution.”  This government document provides many illustrations, photographs, and graphs to show the affect of headphone design on signal transmission.

This document relates to the other texts I have collected because it shows the significance of headphone use in the military.  It also mentions the noise canceling ability of headphones, which is used in a positive sense with this specific application of the technology.  Instead of merely blocking out noise in social environments, the report emphasizes the practical use as a necessary safety measure.  This alters my direction of thinking because it shows a clear beneficial application of headphones, while before I was focusing more on the downsides of the technology.  This leads me to the question of what other practical uses of headphones there may be, other than transmitting sound to an individual for entertainment or escape from social environments.

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Hagood, M. “Quiet Comfort: Noise, Otherness, and the Mobile Production of Personal Space.” American Quarterly, vol. 63 no. 3, 2011, pp. 573-589. Project MUSE, doi:10.1353/aq. 2011.0036.

This article is centered on the Bose QuietComfort noise-cancelling headphones and their use as soundscaping devices in airports and on airplanes. It provides background information about Amar Bose, the company’s creator. The author also discusses the advertising for the product as portraying predominately upper-class white male consumers, and how this emphasizes the Western subjectivity associated with this technology.

The primary strength of this article is its specificity in topic that allows for a comprehensive, though not exhaustive, view of soundscaping by focusing on noise-cancelling headphones. This quality appeals to the audience because the narrow focus makes it easier to follow the argument. The credibility of the author is evident through the extensive examples and use of authoritative and diverse sources.

This article is useful to my research because it presents a function of headphones not conventionally discussed: soundscaping. This is described in the statement, “In these spaces where freedom proves illusory, soundscaping technology provides at least an illusion of freedom, offering the ability to disconnect from the networks of sound and sociality in which one is implicated.” The author is referring to the constraining environment of airplanes, and the escape from one’s surroundings that these headphones offer. As Bose advertises, the noise-cancelling technology is meant to give freedom of mind by mediating the background noise.

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Stankievech, C. “From Stethoscopes to Headphones: An Acoustic Spatialization of Subjectivity.” Leonardo Music Journal, vol. 17 no. 1, 2007, pp. 55-59. Project MUSE, muse.jhu.edu/ article/229986.

This article examines the effect of headphones on in-head acoustic imaging, as well as the subjective experience they create in the listener’s mind. The author exemplifies his argument by describing the invention of the stethoscope in the early nineteenth century, explaining how it opened an audio pathway from a patient’s interior heart chamber to the doctor’s brain.

One strength of this article is its chronological procession from the stethoscope to the use of modern day headphones. This organization appeals to the audience because it allows for easier synthesizing of the text. The author also presents many unique ideas about how headphones generate space inside the head. The three examples of sound artists adds an interesting layer to the piece, however, the article seems to end abruptly after the descriptions are complete; a distinct summation of the argument would add to the article. The author establishes his credibility in the opening paragraph by stating that his article presents a fresh and unique perspective on the function of headphones, rather than discussing their social impact or role in consumerism and science. He also provides solid examples that pertain to his argument and includes useful images, such as figure 3.

This source is useful due to its phenomenological perspective of headphones and example of the predecessor to headphones, the stethoscope. This is a technology I had not considered as relating to the history of headphones, which could be a very interesting element to weave into my paper. One important idea that sums up this article is the concept of sound creating space, as when the author notes, “With the use of the binaural stethoscope (and subsequently with headphones) a sound field can be virtually located within the head. More accurately, space is created within the mass of the body where sound masses float in an impossible space.” This creates an image of an audio reality taking shape in one’s mind.

Against Headphones

This newspaper article argues against the widespread use of headphones.  It describes how the original intended use of headphones was not for isolation.  The author argues that sounds should exist in their natural “audio habitat” and be a social experience rather than cut one off from the rest of the world.  She also mentions how headphones damage teenagers’ hearing, citing it as the primary danger of digital culture.

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